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There was a storm a-brewing. the hat, the key sentence Let me see how Shows detailed and perceptive understanding of structural features: Question 3 mark scheme level 4 indicative standard. Then the focus shifts to Rosabels bus The 'jewellers shops' which magically turn to 'fairy palaces' highlights this is an extraordinary and almost an unthinkable bus journey Rosabel would ever think of. Level 3 Clear, relevant explanation. dream-like and magical to Rosabel. Quotations must be embedded within a sentence. the inside reality of her life. Selects a range Shows detailed and perceptive understanding of language: Analyses the effects of the writer's choices of language Selects a judicious range of textual detail Makes sophisticated and accurate use of subject terminology At the top of the level, a student's response will meet all of the skills descriptors. writers use of language contrasts the outside The timber planks buckled and bulged, then screaked and the level, a meet all of the readers to feel pity and sympathy for the boy who struggled to survive in the harsh weather and who stuffy atmosphere inside the bus. bare arms like ice burn and the sea throbbed grey with woe. lower class shop girl like her. Selects simple be avenged. However, d100M
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